Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Tēnā koe Reef,
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi nunui - Great effort
Ngā āhuatanga pai - Things I liked
1. You've identified some interesting words
2. You added interesting sentences
Ngā āhuatanga hei whakawhanake - Things to develop
1. Ensure the sentences make sense
2. Add an image of the story/chapter to Slide 1